Good my friend....
Sounds good, just put in a little more effort for that little extra. Sounds well composed and thought out, but there is no driving force, and it isn't mixed at all. Mess with panning and volume a bit and maybe anding some more contrasts. But way better than what I've ever done.
Thanks, it's good to know what to work on. That's ok lol I used to give advice like that when my songs actually sucked, but it's still good advice so cheers.
Sounds okay to me...
Some of the instruments aren't mixed well, but as far as a beat just to listen to not bad. To me it sounds okay, but I'm not quite sure what "your style" is. Time to check out other songs.
If you're going to check out ANY of my stuff, do see "Drowning Inner City". THat's dead on how I like to make my remixes. However, yes, I am aware of the poor instruments, but I was building off of a MIDI, and sometimes my DAW likes to not play the track back properly. Well, at least you were helpful, and I appreciate it :D
4 sec loop?
Umm well its sounds like a good start, but its just a short clip playing over and over. You need builds, crashes, depth...
Add some attitude to it man. I like the beat though. Keep a learnin'.
This is my first renoise project lol. You should look at my earlier stuff. Much better stuff. I'm much more proficient in FL Studio
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